Draft outline for a signature assignment

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My “utopia job” is to be the president of a hospital

I chose that because I love helping people, working with people and serving people and when I worked at a hospital after I got out of the army, I was doing secretary work for the president of that hospital and seeing what she does every day was very intriguing to me and I wanted to know more, I have always looked up to her and wanted to be like her. So, that is m long term goal or “utopia/dream” job.