Revise/edit my research paper. only serious offers please.

I will attach my paper below. I will need help going over the paper/editing and adding more info as necessary. The original argument is very weak in my opinion and needs more “back up” references. Please only write to me if you can do this within the deadline. 

 

Also, I have attached the grading rubric to follow. 

 

PS: Paper is a 7 page argumentative research paper w/references. APA style.